Paper 3-Deforestation
1.
The issue is trying to find a solution to
deforestation because rainforest are disappearing at an alarming rate.
2.
Yes there are four different perspectives. The
author writes about the perspectives of local
and indigenous people, businesses, medical researchers, and environmentalists.
The thesis is clear about what the rest of the paper is going to be about.
3.
The introduction and conclusion are both very
well written. The introduction starts out very broad and then funnels down to
what the paper is going to focus on. In the conclusion, the author wraps up his
thoughts and gives his opinion on the issue. This is the only part of the paper
where the author shows opinion, which is good.
4.
I thought this paper was very effective. I wouldn’t
have much advice because I think this paper is very well written.
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